erik
Peasant
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Post by erik on Oct 17, 2004 22:55:03 GMT -4
i am on my own, bathing in melancholy The remanent lonesomeness lingers, So where can i turn to, When all hope is astray? Will you aid me?
Acting in a sure state of depression, What must I do, must i paint myself with a blade? In that I am pursuing to get your attention We know that's what I'm doing.
Is it real, or is it false? You be the judge for that is not my fate. My mind alters my perception of this
I'd wish to rid of it But something inspires me for it is you so who will aid me in my ever so sorrowful time?
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Post by Nymiane on Oct 18, 2004 7:56:19 GMT -4
Meh luvvs, very good.
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erik
Peasant
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Post by erik on Oct 18, 2004 19:01:35 GMT -4
thank you. well this one isnt in my perspective..its looking at someone else and in a way this poem is very sarcastic.
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