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Post by Nymiane on Sept 22, 2004 23:26:13 GMT -4
Okay, going to try something new.. I'm going to post my unfinished product.. This is a Poem I began to write during Gov. class, because there is nothing better to do, to listen to the teacher is SUICIDE. Anyhow.. I'll post what I have so far, it's mainly just jumbled thoughts.. I'll form it into something better...
You- My bane.. My cage. My reason for tears, The very chains that bind me, The very reason for this Dolor, And this blood that coats my limbs..
Hear the faded cries, that linger in the halls. See the trickling blood, against the dreary walls. Do you hear the whispers that call out, And the nails that shred through endless doubt.
Iron cages the soul in tight, Squeezing it to end the fight. Never will the soul fly free, Just will it wallow in misery.
The clanging of the chains that bind her, Constrict and tear, her visions a blur. The jagged little knife, The hampering of her life, Is the blood that coats her limbs.
Hear the haunted voices hymn, “Die softly and sweetly, sad soul, Rest now, dive into the hole, Darkness over comes you, A blanket of death, Strife has stolen your breath, Strife has stolen your breath..”
You- Were the bane of her existence, You- Were that cold cage. You- The reason for her tears.
The reason for her death, The reason for her stillness. You held the knife, you stole the breath, You stole the soul of innocence… The bane, of all existence.
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Post by Nymiane on May 29, 2005 21:36:56 GMT -4
Yeah, well..forgot that project.. ^_~
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Post by Icor on May 30, 2005 5:36:31 GMT -4
19 reads? Bloody hell, I just now read it. Keep going with it, it sounds awesome so far.
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Post by Nymiane on Jun 29, 2005 13:23:48 GMT -4
Yep, I finished it. >_o It's a bit messy, but oh well. Maybe I'll edit it sometime.. I'm not sure.
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Post by Nymiane on Jul 17, 2005 11:55:44 GMT -4
Oi, sure, now no one reads it.
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