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Post by Poetic Love on Oct 7, 2009 13:39:13 GMT -4
Late nights- the moon is afraid of a shining sun. late mornings- the sun surrenders to a bulking moon.
i gaze at the sky, i ask... why the clouds shape the way they do?
im aware of the world, i can feel gravity, this makes me ponder, how can i bend reality?
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Post by Nymiane on Oct 14, 2009 6:45:24 GMT -4
Ooh, I like this one. :} Good job. I *really* like it*
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Post by Poetic Love on Oct 15, 2009 2:10:54 GMT -4
...thanks! it's really a work in progress, yet im not sure when i'll actually go back and add to it lol. i've gotten a lot of feedback based on how to improve the punctuation to make a few lines stand out a bit more.
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