Post by Elder-Youth on Nov 11, 2005 22:36:46 GMT -4
Lost in confusion
Blinded by illusion,
Two paths were present
I felt less the pleasant.
I never turned,
Until I learned
What I wanted.
I could turn around
Show that I'm not bound.
Losing all that I've gained
Just to find an inner flame
Of passion and fun
With the one
That I love.
Perhaps the choice I've made was for the best,
Despite the guilt that has come in consequence.
Guilty that I led a soul into my arms
Sorry that I could not release her.
Though I must,
But can I trust myself not to give in to lust.
Feelings will be hurt,
Hearts will need mending.
I feel like all will be gained
But more will be ending
I sit in confusion
The choice was made,
Her eyes now a cold shade.
Feelings have been hurt,
Hearts been slammed into the dirt.
Sacrificing all I once had
Just for a chance to be glad.
We're growing together,
Hopefully to stay forever.
My hopes are rising,
My heart is pounding.
But is it true?
Or is it a game of uknown presence,
Filled with "faith" and fake presents.
Only time will tell,
Whether all is well
My ex's feelings still linger,
I try to give it time.
While she takes a finger,
I let it slide.
An illusion of feelings erupt inside of me
Leaving me with uncertainty.
But that's now in the past,
I hope she has fun with her new "friend"
I hope they last.
A limb has been set out upon,
There's no way I'm giving up on you.
A chance has been taken.
First a hug
Then a test
The test seems smug,
But the type lacks the voice of the best.
Is it true
Or will I rue
The day that I met you.
No matter what the outcome,
She will be the meaning of grace,
Her name will always bring a warm smile upon my face.
I just paraphrased it to add somewhat of a rhyming scheme, this tells of my love life in the past weeks. . . more will be coming soon. Open to critiques and suggestions
Blinded by illusion,
Two paths were present
I felt less the pleasant.
I never turned,
Until I learned
What I wanted.
I could turn around
Show that I'm not bound.
Losing all that I've gained
Just to find an inner flame
Of passion and fun
With the one
That I love.
Perhaps the choice I've made was for the best,
Despite the guilt that has come in consequence.
Guilty that I led a soul into my arms
Sorry that I could not release her.
Though I must,
But can I trust myself not to give in to lust.
Feelings will be hurt,
Hearts will need mending.
I feel like all will be gained
But more will be ending
I sit in confusion
The choice was made,
Her eyes now a cold shade.
Feelings have been hurt,
Hearts been slammed into the dirt.
Sacrificing all I once had
Just for a chance to be glad.
We're growing together,
Hopefully to stay forever.
My hopes are rising,
My heart is pounding.
But is it true?
Or is it a game of uknown presence,
Filled with "faith" and fake presents.
Only time will tell,
Whether all is well
My ex's feelings still linger,
I try to give it time.
While she takes a finger,
I let it slide.
An illusion of feelings erupt inside of me
Leaving me with uncertainty.
But that's now in the past,
I hope she has fun with her new "friend"
I hope they last.
A limb has been set out upon,
There's no way I'm giving up on you.
A chance has been taken.
First a hug
Then a test
The test seems smug,
But the type lacks the voice of the best.
Is it true
Or will I rue
The day that I met you.
No matter what the outcome,
She will be the meaning of grace,
Her name will always bring a warm smile upon my face.
I just paraphrased it to add somewhat of a rhyming scheme, this tells of my love life in the past weeks. . . more will be coming soon. Open to critiques and suggestions