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Post by Poetic Love on Jul 22, 2007 4:55:10 GMT -4
Okay first off let me just give you guys some history before you read it and get lost. Okay so I have like...200 aliases...I use D3 a lot, but now I've just gone to another alias called Platinumli...he's sorta like my darker side...I just wrote this poem today so I'm just showcasing it off to yall!
Title:Platinumli...Who Am I...? By: Poetic Love
In the vessel of the one called D3, I am he that is unforgiving, He that only desires self preservation, I smite upon any who dare cross my path...
My glare is untaming, My words speak as loud as my actions, My heart beats with more pride than a lion, My thoughts compute quicker than a machine.
I am the part of D3 that has no emotion, I am the part of him that disconnects from all life, The part of him that does not suppress emotions, I am he...I am Platinumli...
No longer will he be heartbroken, Living a life of romance comes to an end, He no longer cares about his past, My eyes do not see what D3 saw...
Who am I you ask? I am what he has become, I am Platinumli...[/size]
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Post by Nymiane on Jul 23, 2007 9:19:32 GMT -4
Well done. Seems a bit quick paced in some areas, but all over it's groovy. :}
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Post by Icor on Jul 25, 2007 13:20:22 GMT -4
It's like an evil logic computer talking or something. I like it.
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Post by Poetic Love on Jul 25, 2007 15:36:08 GMT -4
Thanks for the feedback!
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