Greenhand
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Post by Greenhand on Sept 10, 2004 0:01:19 GMT -4
A thousand miles of weeping skies A thousand miles of woe A thousand miles without you And another thousand to go
A thousand steps could bring me closer Or so very far away But for a thousand nights of starless sky It would be far worse if I should stray
A thousand memories like twisted thorns Touched by sorrow's kiss A thousand more await us It would be a shame for you to miss
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This is my favorite poem that I've ever written (half-tied with "Accepting Fate", really, but I think this is much more well done)...
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Post by injuredone on Oct 6, 2004 21:14:36 GMT -4
This is great, too - I love it!
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Post by jstewart on Oct 10, 2004 8:20:03 GMT -4
Greenhand,
Overall, good job. This poem reminds me of a song, I just happen to forgot which one. I liked it..
Nice job,
-J. Stewart
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Greenhand
Peasant
Truth Seer
Fear me, for I am...
Posts: 37
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Post by Greenhand on Oct 16, 2004 23:54:56 GMT -4
Is it that one Michelle Branch song by the same title? =X I realized what I had named it right after I did so - but I don't regret it, because I didn't even have that in mind as I wrote it. ^^;; Woot.
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