Ryu
Knight
God of Passion
Love is life. Never know love and never know life
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Post by Ryu on Sept 7, 2004 1:04:52 GMT -4
Who said friends were perfect? Who said things always turn out best? Who said friends were all knowing They are people who make mistakes like the rest
All people make mistakes Friends are no less They are people too They go through distress
It takes a lot to grow It takes a lot to learn Even if one changes his ways He has trust he must earn
I myself am not perfect Far from it, I'm mostly slime But still I try my best With a attitude quiet sublime
I guess I'm sorry for what I did I can not excuse my crime But all I can hope is change With the passing of time
I'm sorry I know or what I have done There is nothing I would love more Then to turn back time and earn trust And even our little score
I guess I mumbble I guess I stutter All that I do say But here I plead with tary eye Forgive me,okay?
But I know it's too soon, I know it's too hard To bring back one's concent So I work my time and try my luck to make friendship evident
So I say with a hopeful heart I keep in my mind That we will be friends For depths of all time
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Post by jstewart on Oct 10, 2004 8:23:57 GMT -4
Ryu,
I thought that this was very well written. I imagined this as a song and to me, it would be great as a song. I liked your diction.. Overall, good job.
Well done,
-J. Stewart
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