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Post by Nymiane on Aug 30, 2004 15:50:25 GMT -4
I love this poem. It's a year old. I wrote it from a guy's point of view.
Why I am writing this, I don't know. Why I am feeling like this, heaven could only know. If you only knew of those night I spent lying awake, Dreaming,.. of you.. Yes,Yes. I dream of you, Yes, yes. I ache for you.. My heart aches,my heart breaks, when I see you, I just want to be with you!
Why do I sit here, writing a letter, knowing better. I'll never send it, maybe I'll just forget it. No,Perhaps in the future I'll regret it. Still..
Remember that summer night you layed in my arms? I whispered to you, I whispered I'd keep you from all harm. My vow.
Remember the night we said "best friends forever"? Well, I didn't mean it, but I did... See what you do to me? I don't even make sense! Forever best friends, Forever a secret love. Perhaps I'll tell you, Perhaps I won't, But when I look into your golden eyes, I melt, everything is just so. No, No, I could never tell you this though. You could never know what the smell of your,skin,hair, your being, your lips...
Oh, no! Stupid me here I go! My feelings begin to flow, Wishful thinking again.
I made a vow to you, to me. Protect you from harms way, forever and always. Love you..'Til the end. Love you always.. Love, Your best friend.
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Post by jstewart on Oct 10, 2004 8:35:35 GMT -4
Nymiane,
One word: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Nice job. I liked how you wrote it as a letter. Interesting format and unique at the same time.
Good job (as always),
-J. Stewart
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Post by Nymiane on Oct 10, 2004 12:59:05 GMT -4
Thank you. I haven't really used that format again, but I thought it was quite interesting.. I enjoy expirmenting with different ways of writing, anything but the correct way..aya?
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