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Post by Nymiane on Aug 30, 2004 15:45:57 GMT -4
What to do, When I'm lying here in your arms, What to do while I lay here, Crying in your arms.
What if I said, "I love you." What if I said, "I cherish all that you do."
What if I said, "I truly care." Would you be happy? Or would you be scared?
I always thought.. One like you could never exist, Until that one time, We happened to kiss.
The words you spoke to me, Were so gentle and so sweet! The problem is I love you! The feeling I can not beat!
And so, My friend.. I ask you this, "What's a friend to do?"
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Wrote this poem about a friend of mine about a year or so ago. It was very emotional for me, not sure it even captures what I went through.
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Post by jstewart on Oct 10, 2004 8:27:05 GMT -4
Nymiane,
I can imagine how emotional this was for you. As you have said, you are thankful for your life, for it is where you get your inspiration from. I had a tough time reading this- It reminded me of me back a couple months ago. Emotional time, yes. Overall, I liked this poem a lot. Emotion is something that I like to read, along with feeling it. Oh, this also reminds me of my friend's breakup, the first two stanzas.. Not a happy time at all.
Excellent read,
-J. Stewart
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