Ryu
Knight
God of Passion
Love is life. Never know love and never know life
Posts: 107
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Post by Ryu on Aug 27, 2004 1:42:39 GMT -4
Depths of my sorrow Do I yearn to be free now You're laugh salvation
(Sometimes when you're sad as someone to keep you company...better then hurting alone)
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Ryu
Knight
God of Passion
Love is life. Never know love and never know life
Posts: 107
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Post by Ryu on Aug 29, 2004 12:44:10 GMT -4
Silent Winter sigh Echos of perfection ring eternal shadow
(Just because a friend might not seem like one by bragging or being open, they might be your truest friends in the darkest times)
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Ryu
Knight
God of Passion
Love is life. Never know love and never know life
Posts: 107
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Post by Ryu on Aug 31, 2004 6:26:33 GMT -4
Essence of chaos Summer's rapture winter's heart Nothing shall matter
(Friends are with you always in any condition, and the best to worst thing dosen't change friendship)
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Post by jstewart on Oct 10, 2004 8:33:56 GMT -4
Ryu,
I am so glad that I read these haikus. I thought that these were very well written..
The first:
Although I found the message after the haiku a little confusing, I looked back and realized how strong of a haiku this really is. I think that you have a talent for writing haikus. Very well done..
The second:
I have to agree 100%. Currently, I'm drawing away from my best friend because not only of his stupidity, but for his immaturity, selfishness, and bragging ways. Now that I think about it, I don't like him, except when he's there for me during the times that I feel alone, small, and wanna just crawl into a hole and die. Nicely done..
The third:
I liked this one, just not as much as the second haiku. Very well written and gets the point across. Good job!
Overall, your haikus did hit a nice spot and made me think about my friends and my relationship with my friends, in which I haven't done for a while. Thank you for opening my eyes through your writing.
The one and only,
-J. Stewart
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