. Immortal Beloved .

[Nymiane]

After watching the Movie, I've felt completely different, mixed emotions. I've felt sad, relieved and burdened. This is a poem that was sort of inspired by the movie. I'm pretty sure this thread is the correct one to place it in, rather than inspired.

Now, Please apologize for the lack of talent in this one..it's a rough draft, I will most likely be working on this piece.. I just wanted to get my thoughts out..
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To my Immortal Beloved,

My Angel, My beloved, there is not a moment that passes by, that my thoughts don't drift and I find myself, thinking of you. You cloud my mind, and yet I have no complaints. You drive me from my work, and yet, no complaints. For it has been years since I have seen your face, but there has been not a place, not a journey, that I have not thought of you.
I've searched your eyes before, I've dived into your soul, the aura of your love is more than great, but do you know of my love for you? And as my distress grows, I have but one thing to ask of you. I need to see you, I need you. Beloved, meet me under the Willow tree when the clock tolls it's three. If you are there, we will go far from here, we will be one, united in love, forever. If you are not.. I shall watch you from afar, you will always be my love, no matter.

You are my Immortal Beloved.
Love,
Your Angel of Music.

[Icor]

I never heard about that movie. I need to go watch it. If I see it, I'd prolly enjoy this poem more (Even though I enjoy it too much already).

[ladydragonrider]

phantom of the opera poem? I love that movie. Good poem. ^.^

[Nymiane]

No, it was a mixture.. Phantom/Beloved.. I tried pulling the anguish from both of the lovers. ^_~ I didn't do a good job.. but I'll fix it up later on.

[ladydragonrider]

nevertheless, it is a great poem.