I Hate

[Sketchy's Sweetest Sorrows]

I might hate myself,
but I hate you more.

I hate the way I feel,
when I think of you.
I hate the way I hurt,
without you.
I hate the way I cry,
when I'm around you.
I hate the way I act,
when you're watching.
I hate the way I dress,
when you comment.
I hate the way I answer,
whenever you ask.
I hate the way I love,
whenever you hurt me.

I might hate you,
but I hate myself more.

[Greenhand]

Shpiffy. ^^ I've always been a fan of well-used repetiton.

[Sketchy's Sweetest Sorrows]

Thanks Greenhand! ^_^;

[PyroTechGod]

The reversal between your beginning and ending two lines is a nice touch, as well.

[Sketchy's Sweetest Sorrows]

Thanks. I thought it was a rather nifteh addition.